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Jadethorn is off in place beyond Sablestar's sight. The night is thick with springtime mist hanging low, petrichor and peat filling his nose. The tuxedo turned his head to face the same direction as Fleapaw whoi was instructed to keep her back turned from her new mentor as she sped off to find somewhere decent to hide. Sablestar knew the striped molly would not make it easy for the apprentice. Fleapaw was over two moons into training now, and with the headstart on Stoatpaw's training even Sablestar saw his own trainee outpaced the cinnamon she-cat now.

"I think that's enough time. Let's take a look." Sablestar rose to all four paws now and glanced between the trees through squinted, scarred eyes. "It takes all senses to track down what you're looking for. You know what you want, so tell me what you see." They would go through this step by step until they found Jadethorn.

 
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Fleapaw squinted through the mist, face streaked with damp. The dark swathed everything, humid and heavy, clogging her nose like sickbreath. Her head swiveled to Sablestar, throat bobbing as she tried to swallow the lump that formed there. Wasn't no reason to be nervous—Who cared if she failed or passed the stupid test? It wasn't any fault of her own, right? No that was Possumgrins fault… That stupid lazy bastard who slacked off and left her out to float.

Jadethorn was out there somewhere, cloaked in muck that would make her harder to track. Fleapaw did want to impress her. Her claws flexed into the mud, jaw tightening with determination.

I can do this.

The silence pressed in around her, broken by the squelch of her own paws. The fog blurred everything past a length til every hunk of wood, puddle, and rock looked the same. Even the air was thick with the scent of peat and rot, but none of it betrayed what she needed to know. But still, none of that compared to the dark forest. The forest there was made of something else entirely, so dense and dark that no light would ever find its way in. The smell of decay so intense that you could taste it with every breath...

Somewhere behind them she could feel another set of eyes cold against her skin. Fleapaw was tempted to look, but she faced forward Froststorm would want her to focus and she wanted to show him that the time he spent training her wasn't wasted.

Fleapaw spared Sablestar a quick glance, heart thudding into her throat. "I can do that uh.. use all my… y-yeah okay." Her eyes cast around them and then down to their paws. If it were daytime, she would just pick out the tracks but that was not happening tonight.

She tries anyway, shuffling around trying to pinpoint any tracks in the dirt. (1d20 -> 7: minor fail) "Theres ah—a bunch of tracks here." Fleapaw notices indents in the dirt, but they were a mess. Smudged and trampled together, the mist further makes them difficult to read by distorting edges and turning everything to soup.

It quickly confuses the apprentice, so she searches for disturbances instead—broken twigs, drag marks, anything that might lead her in the right direction. (1d20 -> 6: basic fail) Her tail lashes quietly in frustration, but she's far from ready to give up.

Tried to find tracks in the mud. → Failed
Looked for disturbances to lead her to Jadethorn. → Failed

Higher and higher you chase it
FLEAPAW
9 MOONS
SHE/HER
- Undersized cinnamon solid with folded ears. She's thin but stubby with very messy fur.
"SPEECH" - crimson | 'THOUGHTS/EMPHASIS' - crimson
Fleapaw values family the most with survival at a close second. In conversations, she is blunt, fun-loving, and clever. She is guided by her desires which often leads her astray. Despite her abrasive personality, she cares deeply for those she loves and will do anything to protect them. Due to her experiences, Fleapaw is corrupt and has minimalistic, if any, morals. She does not care for the warrior code and its restraints. Neither does she believe in StarClan. Growing up in a kitten mill, being separated from her mother, and ending up on the streets have deeply affected her view of the world.


Its deep in your bones go and take it